Sunday, January 17, 2010

ALOHA PLUSH: Rough Draft

Here's a new kind of sketch, a rough draft of a story I call "ALOHA, Plush!"

FADE IN:

EXT. PARKING LOT – AFTERNOON

The parking lot of a theme park holds a SUV with two small car decorations, PLUSH and ALOHA. PLUSH is stuck on the back of the SUV, on the window. ALOHA is placed on the dashboard in the front.
PLUSH
(Lifeless and stuck to the window. But as soon as he blinks he comes to life, and yawns. He then unstuck one of his paws, and then swings himself around to look at the dashboard.)
ALOHA
(Dancing while wobbling her body back and forth humming.)
PLUSH
(After watching her from a far, he pops himself off the window to get a closer look. Because his attention is all focused on ALOHA, he falls into the back seat.)

INT. BACK OF SUV – AFTERNOON
The SUV is the standard SUV with two sets of seats, a radio, and a trunk. Plush is now in the back seat aiming to get to the front.
PLUSH
(He uses his suction cups to climb up the window. When he reaches the top he jumps on to the top of the seat, but just nearly. He decides to ride down the seat belt, which he gets stucked and slings back into the back seat.)

(After he makes his way back using the same methods before, but this time he now gets off the seat belt before it launches back to the rest. Plush then looks up to see ALOHA again, he is now reminded of what fuels his ambition.)

INT. FRONT OF SUV – AFTERNOON
The front of the SUV seems tall compared to PLUSH. Just above him is the girl of his dreams. Standing in his way is a mountain like Radio system. The window on the passenger’s side is half way up.
PLUSH
(Plush aims to climb the radio system to reach ALOHA, but he can barely reach a nob. When he does finally reach it, he turns it and then the volume goes up. The volume is so loud that it actually knocks Plush off the radio. He desperately tries to get back on the radio, and finally successes and he is prepared for the impact and falls into the passenger seat.)

(He climbs up the passenger seat’s window. Once he see’s Aloha he strikes a pose.)
ALOHA
(She blushes from seeing PLUSH.)
PLUSH
(He accidently puts his foot onto the window button, and it begins to raise up taking Plush with it.)
ALOHA
(Stars to giggle at the event.)

PLUSH
(He tries to pop off his arm, but it won’t come loose. He accepts this and waits for it pop off on its own. He then lands on ALOHA’s arms.)

ALOHA
(After catching Plush, she gives him a quick kiss.)

FADE OUT


I like to point out that the formatting is wrong after I posted it on the blog, but it is in the correct script format in its original file.

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